Comments : Battle of the Seasons (Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    Very awesome. You create an atmosphere by itself within the first line and you did a great job. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    You are right, winter is always creeping :)

    Right now it has creeped long enough but won't go away. I hope spring finally comes :p

    Great write!

  • 11 years ago

    by TSI25

    Snap freezes in spring can be so devastating on foliage, and only hardy plants are liable to survive.

    i like the message i took away from this; "even if it looks like things are looking up, like spring is here, be cautious... you never know when something terrible might surprise you."