I wanted to be

by Sherwin Talapian   Apr 13, 2013


Be your vitamins
who will make you strong.
make you stand whenever you fall.

be your omega 3.
who will guard your heart.
through your pain and misery.

be your blood.
who will flow through your veins.
make's your heart beat.
be a reason why you live.

be close to your heart finally.
your man and love you forever.
who and will make's you happy.
be the one who turn you to be
a girl who's brokenhearted free.
that's what i wanted to be.

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  • 11 years ago

    by therhesha

    Great poem, can feel thoroughly your message to your special girl..

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Thanks... miss madam salamat po ng marami sa totoo nga po eh tagahanga mo din po ako. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba

    A bit of typos are there.. They are a pain i know xD
    anyways, a good poem it is
    ..nicely penned down :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Nice poem

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    What a heart touching dream, I wished for that at a time too! Stay strong, you are a very talented writer!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw... thanks madam for your comment.... i will make my work better thanks to your comments... i won't stop writing and won't stop learning thanks guys... !!! i love you all ...

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Lovely!

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