Comments : I wanted to be

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Lovely!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    What a heart touching dream, I wished for that at a time too! Stay strong, you are a very talented writer!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw... thanks madam for your comment.... i will make my work better thanks to your comments... i won't stop writing and won't stop learning thanks guys... !!! i love you all ...

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Nice poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba

    A bit of typos are there.. They are a pain i know xD
    anyways, a good poem it is
    ..nicely penned down :)

  • 11 years ago

    by therhesha

    Great poem, can feel thoroughly your message to your special girl..

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Thanks... miss madam salamat po ng marami sa totoo nga po eh tagahanga mo din po ako. :)