Oh Hannah this is amazing! The title is such a powerful caption and within your poem you managed to hold the same power and create the same impact with the images.

The idea of these clouds grieving because they cannot find their sunshine... I love the mention of hide and seek, it is like holding on to the hope it will return.

I like how this poem can simply be a nature poem of what is it, or it can be put into the context of our own life and how we fight depression and perhaps the sunshine is relating to the happiness we long to seek. Both ways work very well and create a very enjoyable poem.

I almost want to reach up, grab the sun and put it back in the sky for these clouds!!

Nice work :) x

This blew me away , the creativity behind this
Is untouchable ,

The last part just finished it perfectly

Amazing :)

This reminds me of a scene in fantasia where zeus is hurling thunderbolts at the terrified denizens of the earth below.

its not exactly an accurate comparison, as a number of the characters here seem to thoroughly enjoy the lightning, mostly the clouds. it makes sense that their grieving too, grieving clouds implies crying implies raining. pretty artful personification.

i like how it ends on a subtle, hopeful note with the clouds sort of drifting through the corners of the earth, seeking out their lost sun.

obviously the sun is some object of adoration, which also makes sense. night and darknes have some pretty negative connotations(that can be seen all throughout religion, literature, and even just personal instinct.)

definitely an interesting write.

This is really good. Probably read that phrase couple times over but yeah, you just gotta read it one more time from me, lol. I think the title is very interesting, lots of poems were written about clouds, mostly associated with sadness but somehow you made this one somewhat fresh. Real fine work.

Now this is so well written and I really liked the fact that the clouds, thunder etc were put in character. When reading it it painted a very lively image where all is been viewed while the writer is writing this poem...an excellent piece!!

I loved this poem as well because of the wording you used. This poem seems to be more of an adventure for you. I believe you take the reader on a real journey though the "stages" of emotions that nature feels. I loved how you brought nature to life and give each part of them a characteristic or trait that each one feels. It seems like the main characters are lightning and thunder. I loved the imagery of crying you present here. It seems like the clouds are part of the "family". Lol.. and the use of grieving is well placed I think. Because of the wording used before with dampened eyes. The last stanza made me smile because they searched for the "sun" only to find it hidden. The use of. Clouds is underrated here I believe because the clouds can search a lot more because they float slowly. The imagery is great. And the sun hiding tells me it's night time maybe. Which just adds more to it. Great write Hannah