Comments : The gone time

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    So here after u will not maitain the silent eyes and unspoken words this is really nice to hear mira.
    U made a good promise with yourself .

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Mira you made a touching piece that everyone really needs to read and enjoy. The title, the content, the style, everything is enticing. I'm really happy to read it.
    Some points have to be editted to show the poem in its final perfect manner. These include:

    "It just come like that" the word "come" should be "comes"
    "I keey hearing it all the day" the word "keey" should be "keep"
    "my self" should be one word as "myself"
    "abel" shouild read "able" and "comming" should read "coming".
    This aside, I enjoyed reading yr work. Thank you for sharing this with us.