by WintersAngel Apr 15, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The light is dim here. |
by Erick Neal
Very powerful and deep words. Enjoyed the read. |
by Nick
This is a great poem! I love how the first four stanzas repeated "here," it gives an interesting new perspective on depression-- that it is more than just emotion, your mind is in an entirely different place. I also like how you used short sentences for each line, it really speaks to the spirit of depression. |
by chloe
I love the line `Black rain takes over the flood.`So good such a emotionless story but the poem is filled with feeling , love it! |
Death is nothing more and nothing less we live to die and we die to live born into a world called gods last given gift before he pasted and perished away we are just little people in a giant world trying to live each day as if it was our last we have too look into the future and not look back into our past =) i like your poems they have so much description. |
Death is nothing more and nothing less we live to die and we die to live born into a world called gods last given gift before he pasted and perished away we are just little people in a giant world trying to live each day as if it was our last we have too look into the future and not look back into our past =) i like your poems they have so much description. |