Wonderfully Penned Rebecca!!!

Outstnading job writing this, I LOVE THIS POEM, fantastic poem, you couldn't have done it any better!

Very good work. in the beginning i thought you were only speaking of lifes evils. seems as life was your relationship?. powerful wordplay and nicely put together. maybe a pronoun in one of the first few stanzas to portray pains intended/unintended targets or creators. just a thought, but now i feel like i sound stupid. :P good work

In darts of pain, joy is refined. A child who doesn't cry, won't try. When pressurized, victory is near.
Indeed beautifully worded!

A truly beautiful poem Rebecca.
I am in awe at your talent!
Such powerful emotions put simply into words.
Your beautiful words..

If you have no kids yet, sweetheart, I advice you to find love elsewhere. You are still so young, even younger than my son, who has not even had a girlfriend yet.

If you find it difficult to make a decision, try to imagine yourself 10 years from now: what are you doing, who are you with, do you have children, and if so: are they raised in a loving family setting? Think hard hun..and chose for one person's happiness only : YOURS.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This was extremely powerful. And there were a couple lines that really stood out to me, like the 5th stanza, about the life you thought you had. 5/5