Magnificent poem, I really enjoyed reading it, excellent poem!!!! 100/100

Last sentence of the last stanza should be "and" instead of "an" besides that I still can't stand that it has a bunch of periods when you should be putting commas or making a new stanza but that's my weakness anyways it's very adorable I like the rhyming but try making a poem that doesn't rhyme and I would love to see it keep writing hun! 5/5

-Mori