Forget You

by Rythmer21   Apr 16, 2013


Our love is gone,
it's been all wrong.
I thought it love,
now its regret.
I've now moved on,
now let's forget.

For what's the sense of fighting for a love that was so wrong?
What's the point in renewing a flame that's been gone so long?
I try so hard to show you, but I wish that you could see.
You'll have my heart but once, so don't fight so desperately.

For when I left you,
I left for good.
My heart is back together,
like I know it should,

So I won't cry no more,
because crying was all in vain.
You used to be someone,
but now you're just a name.

So what's the sense of fighting for a love that was so wrong?
What's the point in renewing a flame that's been gone so long?
I try so hard to show you, but I wish that you could see.
You'll have my heart but once, so don't fight so desperately.

I will always remember the times we have shared
The times I knew you always cared
But now it's time to live anew
now it's time to forget you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, I love how there is no order ot pattern to how long your lines are on each verse compared to the next, really sets a great lay-out! You truly write very beautifully, two thumbs up!

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    It's very cute but it sounds forced to me... while both the rhyme and the way it flowed was wayyy to forced in my mind i think that the emotions in the poem are intense and i should think that although you went through a breakup you should be able to bounce back when the time is right and i hope you the best! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by Rythmer21

      Thanks for the critique and advice! I do agree...it may be a little forced. I guess I was just trying to prove a point! Ha. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by DrucaLuv

    I just went thru a tough break up. i think this sums up how she feels. who knows about the future but your finality is very powerful here. 2 and 5 are good. leave them in. they reiterate your attempts and the way your feel. good stuff

    • 11 years ago

      by Rythmer21

      Thank you for the advice! I'm very sorry about your break up. One of the reasons I wrote this poem is because its easier to leave the past in the past and move on than to always be looking back. Remember that God has an amazing plan for you if only you follow His ways!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rythmer21

    Anyone have any thoughts? I need some help editing. Should I leave stanza 2 and 5 or take them out. I wrote them in, thinking I might turn this into more of a song. Any comments or advice would be appreciated!

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