This is a unique poem that has facts that many people choose to ignore, the reality is that terrorism is real and many people are affect by it. I would never associate religion with terrorism because terrorism is heartbreaking.

Very thought provoking...

Its heartbreaking to read about the sad incident which shattered many souls.

This is a heart-felt poem for those innocent beings.

Keep writing:)

Awww Khalid what lovely tribute to the people affected or killed by the Boston bombings. It was so sad to hear... I had some friends who lives close to there and thank God they weren't hurt. But it was still terrifying and I can't imagine what the families of the people who died feel. All these tragedies really affect me, because I feel like I wish I could do something to help.

This poem was really heartfelt and sweet. Hats off to you for a great tribute! <3

I enjoyed this poem, short and to the point.

I also found the rhyme scheme intriguing and the "message" to be clear. Religion has nothing to do with Terrorism.

5/5

Fitting tribute.

So heartfelt, and such a great tribute my friend.

Great piece.
:)

Dark and grizzly. ive got to agree with everlasting in terms of the message, religion does not justify or correlate with terrorism.

my only complaint would be that a number of the rhymes seemed a bit forced, but that could just be how uncommon a number of the words are...

Wow a nice tribute to those that have fallen and now are up there or whereever the fallen go...i really loved the rhyming in the poem i thought it was really good and the form it was it just made me go WOW i love how it is formed but this poem is a great way to say that although they maybe lost they won't be forgotten! 5/5

Queen Ashlin

Lovely tribute and message here. Terrorism isn't a religion at all, every race has their own terrorists. We all have hearts and can feel the pain because each country has been through it at one point or another.

Great job!