I thought this was beautifully penned. I really enjoyed the read. Nice work.

A very interesting poem and makes me think about it a lot! I like the mixture of beauty of a person/person's character mixed with the beauty of nature or perhaps the surrounding as well. I must admit though some of the words I had to look up but all in all it was so very well written.

Congrats on the win :D

A very interesting poem and makes me think about it a lot! I like the mixture of beauty of a person/person's character mixed with the beauty of nature or perhaps the surrounding as well. I must admit though some of the words I had to look up but all in all it was so very well written.

Congrats on the win :D

I miss reading your poetry, its so beautiful and exhilaratingly dark....Great Job!

I'm in love with the usage of Praxinoscope film!!! I have never seen it used, so props for being original!

The second stanza is very steamy, but not explicitly so. I really like that quality in a write, when someone can write about someones body without using vulgar words. You made it elegant.

I really like the word Lavanya ... I'm unsure if that's this woman's name or if you just chose it for the meaning... whichever, it definitely lives up to the meaning. Such a beautiful name!!!

I think adding holographic walls was an awesome touch, especially with the praxinoscope film mentioned earlier. It has a consistent theme going on.

Overall, this was an awesome write! I don't think I've ever read any of your work before, but I guarantee I'll be back. :)

This one is one of my fav from yours.

Good job my friend