Oh my gosh, this is the single most creative title toss thing ever.

Holy shiznits.

"{ Breathing under water }

A tsunami of tears, has moisturised the cracks in my frozen completion, as I've played the sceans over and over... like an oscar winner motion picture on repete."

That was my favorite. There's a few spelling errors "scenes" and "repeat". Other than that, this seriously..was weekly win worthy. Fantastic wording and use of similes. :)

*Edit Nominated this a few days ago. I keep reading this. I totally love it.

I agree with Linda this deserves a win!!!
So amazing and touching.
Awesome job my friend:)

This just may be my favorite of yours, just splendid! I really enjoyed reading this, the way I was sucked into this poem was incredible and very powerful. As usual, your talent astounds me, and I am happy to see just increases with each poem. Well done.