by who i am is me Apr 17, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
To my very core, you unravel me. |
by Hellon
I'm intrigued with your words and this poem...I really do like it but..although it's free verse I would love for you to change some of the sentences around a little..pm me if you are interested? |
Thanks Hellon. And I do agree about the God comment. Very constructive and am looking into it. |