by Jon Apr 17, 2013
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
You have but one life on Earth, |
by Marcy Lewis
This is good. The rhyming seemed forced at times, but this is good. Remember - that not all poetry has to have a rhyming basis. |
by Jon
Thank you, I wasn't initially planning on there being a rhyme scheme but it developed into that in the beginning and I just wanted to keep consistency. |