This is a really eery kind of write. The imagery:

exhales from dehydrated lips.
as spirits orb in circular artistry,
sun drenched birth of mourn

are chillingly beautiful. I absolutely love.

Wooow:)
This is a piece of art!!!
Awesome job!!

-Sighs- I've just read Meme's contest piece about rain and life, then Hannah's latest about love, that was so sensual, then Linda's piece that just made me cry and then this....it gave me goosebumps, chills...it was eery yet remarkably beautiful in its imagery, how do you do that?

What a whirlwind of feelings, emotions, experiences...

You have such a gift, to take something like a spider and make it sound so pleasant yet so creepy...
The wording is so unique, and some might say it's fussy and over-worded but I think it's you, and you're awesome as you are...this is what I love about your writes, the way they are exquisitely penned...so smooth yet so complex

Hugs and love
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