Comments : Limeade

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    This poem made me laugh Rosey! A great little story wrapped up in your poetic words. Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by rosey

    Thank you :)

  • 11 years ago

    by garrett poteet

    First part did not rhyme but that last did so you need to fix that.