Your greatest birthday present ...

by Athanael   Apr 18, 2013


Your greatest birthday present ...

... Is the one you gave me and made me smile, and filled my heart of joy ...

... Is the one I think of and smile about, because it enlightens my day and makes me proud ...

... Is the one that makes me think I'm really lucky to have met you ...

... Is the one I really would like to keep inside me forever, because of how great it feels ...

Your greatest birthday present ...
... Is YOU

Don't change the way you are, because you are amazing. But even if you were to change, you'd still be my greatest birthday present, simply because it's YOU.

You may have written such incredible birthday words, most of which has really moved me and made me happy .... but once again ... remember ... your greatest birthday present ....
... is YOU

Stefano

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Dedicated to a backwards circle

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  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    LMFAO. Britt, shut up. hahahaha

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Just friends my ass.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    You probably realized by now...that I read this when I need an ego boost, lmao

    Seriously..you know what I'm going through right now and this always succeeds in making me feel better. I love you. And you know I'm always here for you too.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Reading this again and my heart is just melting all over again. You're a freaking douche <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Well, firstly, you need to think of more unique titles. I thought you had imagination? Sheese. Tehehe.

    I'm choosing to state my thoughts here because if I tell you on mic, you'll laugh at me for becoming emotional about this.

    Okay, here we go:

    Although.. I'll first admit that I really wasn't expecting this. And I guess that just proves the "T" in your A-Z list :)

    Let's go line by line, actually.

    However, firstly I'm glad you liked it, I did inform you I wasn't going to write you a poem, and that was precisely because I wanted it to be a surprise, and not something you were expecting. I hesitated sharing what I did with you actually, because of how emotional (haha) and personal it was, and I may have been wondering if you would like it as I was sharing it with you. So, I'm really glad that you did.

    Now. -originally- when I read this, I became confused after reading this (the first opening lines) and the following lines, until I got further down and...well. What can I say? You're amazing. I'm more amazing of course, but you're pretty damn good too. ;)

    "and makes me proud ..."

    ^^ Thank you. Thank you so much. You'll never know how much that means to me.

    You are indeed lucky to have met me, aren't you?! I miiiight be lucky too..maybe. Even though you drive me more nuts than anyone...ever.

    I just...I know when you first shared this with me, my original response was to claim you were a douche...but...that's only because it was so unexpected and thoughtful and it means so much to me. It made me tear up (in a good way bahaha) and...you're just incredible.

    "Don't change the way you are, because you are amazing."

    I want to tell you the same. Don't ever change, okay? I forbid you to!

    "your greatest birthday present ....
    ... is YOU"

    Well. You're just a great big trout! You will really never know how much ALL of this means to me. It was/is just so incredible, caring, and moving.

    I am very lucky to have met you, and I'm so grateful that you are in my life, and I don't want you to ever leave it. You're not allowed to, actually!

    Now. Nitpick.

    "most of which has really moved me"

    Most? Most?! ALL of it should have moved you and made you happy lmao.

    Seriously...thank you so, so much. You're my best friend and I love you. Thank you for being in my life.

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