Veru very beautifully written. Sometimes we have to live for others. Keep writing I want read your more poems.
Award winning lines--"Seeing their tears
Suddenly brings back fears
Left hidden all these years". These lines have made you a perfect poet.

Awwwwww my sweet daughter!!! i love the way it flows although it seems in some parts like it was forced as well there were some spelling errors but this poem gets to my heart and souls since i know how you feel...been there before 5/5

Your mommy

This is such an outstanding poem, wonderful job, two thumbs up!!!