Amazing. Message me baby girl. It'll all be okay 5/5

You had a very good message with expressing your emotions, and I could tell it was definitely a release. Good for not cutting, that's not something that will every truly heal you. Keep focusing on poetry to be your therapy, it does help! :)

I really liked how the words flow smoothly, it's very expressive too

Such a classic tale of heartbreak at the hands of an ex boyfriend, self mutilation, and domestic troubles is essentially par for the course on this website, however youve effectively incorporated a couple pieces and phrases that i find mildly more nuanced than the usual fare. overall its pretty good.

Lots of personal emotion in this piece. I have gone through this type of situation (the break up with your true love deal, not the cutting/parents).

Let me tell you from experience, there is always someone else. I honestly know you may not want to hear that, but its true. Keep your chin up and you will find that mr right.