The Demon Inside

This is sooo amazing you are a great writer!

THIS COULD BE A POETRY SLAM1!!!! And I do poetry slams, so I know this would be an excellent one, remarkable, so much compassion and passion. So much power and force, heat and energy. This is bursting with emotions and heart, unleashing feelings and raging agony. Heartaches and shattering glass go off in my head and the thurshing and bouncing of this poem runs through my life as I read it's intense words and it's immensely full of meaning lines, truly remarkable writing! I loved every bit of it, please never stop writing, this piece of writing is really terrific, tremendous talent is in you no doubt!! Two thumbs up.

This is very sad. I love the Misery the reader feels after reading this poem. I can feel your pain and sadness. The writer did an excellent job of expressing their feelings.
I love the mysterious of the she as you don't say a name leaving the reader guessing about a lot of things. This poem really makes you think from start to end 5/5

I loved it and it was original. I can feel the heartache and agony. 5/5

I loved it and it was original. I can feel the heartache and agony. 5/5