Maybe you have been a calligrapher in all
constellations,
^Oh how I love this! Calligrapher really makes me think 'classical' since calligraphy was something of the past.

Ireland seems to have tangled words that slur
^Makes me think you are talking about their distinct accent. I love accents, and sometimes it's exactly what you fall for in someone because of how sexy their voice is haha. So if that's what this line means, then I love it! Perfect descriptiton.

For I dream of being a Napa Sun,
^I can't believe I never had heard of a Napa Sun until now, clearly I don't drink :P I think it's one of those though that sounds very poetic and fits in great!

I also had no idea who Donatello was, sounds familiar though. Looked him up and it could not fit anymore perfect with that last line. It's perfection! I would however eliminate the 'a' before Donatello. It's up to you though I feel like it would flow better without :D Also this is a lovely reference in your poem because it is someone of the past, makes you think classical.

Great poem!

I know i am never good on commenting on poems and honestly this is my first time to do this MA but i find your poem soooo nice ! the visual and thermal imageries were excellently done . you even put gustatory imagery to put "flavor" and "spice" in your poem . overall , excellent ! :D