by Courageous Dreamer Apr 20, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Often I wish I could catch |
by Odd David
Interesting poem and format. I enjoyed the vivid images and the over all content. |
by Piogga
I think this is one of those abstract poems whose focal point is more on its imagery than meaning. It has different meanings, and I'm sure there would be different and varied interpretations from different people, as an abstract painting would. Another element I really liked was the tone. Although the sentences were a little too long for me, the line breaks and use of commas didn't make it overwhelming. |
by Skyfire
I thought this was absolutely wonderful, but I lost a little of the flow at the very end: |
I really liked the first two lines and then the fourth and fifth, they really spoke out ot me, the whole poem is so beautiful, spirit lifting, wonderful poem |