by CathyButterflyJC Apr 21, 2013
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
(orginal title) |
by dalllllal
Your way if writing here is amazing I enjoyed this from beginning to end keep it up |
by Mohan
Simply cute... |
by Treehugger
This is the best poem from you that I have read. The only thing I didn't like was the words 'thee end' at the very end of it. it didn't flow with the rest of the poem. but its up to you to keep it there. |
by Kate
I love it. So true and it paints a very light picture of the innocence and love the ocean holds. Nice job. |