I love it. So true and it paints a very light picture of the innocence and love the ocean holds. Nice job.

This is the best poem from you that I have read. The only thing I didn't like was the words 'thee end' at the very end of it. it didn't flow with the rest of the poem. but its up to you to keep it there.

I do love love this poem though, you speak beautifully on how the ocean can heal a person. your words speak so much truth. <3 5/5

Simply cute...

Your way if writing here is amazing I enjoyed this from beginning to end keep it up