Comments : CHANCES IN LIFE

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Hi mr.dwidar...=) how are you??

    anyways....
    it is a chance in terms of love...

    in 3rd stanza...it seems your world stops revolving and rotating when you saw her...
    happens in love,,really...

    but ilove this one..

    "Coming to her with emotions like flames burning
    Saying if I failed at least I will be happy I tried"

    "Better always to be adventurer
    Rather than staying safe in neglected part"

    ....it takes a great courage to try and accept whatever the result is....
    and its not that easy...

    good job sir.... =)

  • 11 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Thanks a lot Dindee for your valuable comment :)