Comments : Effervescent (Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this haiku...The idea of bubbles representing the raindrops, that's beautiful, really pretty imagery here.

    Oh, I just love it...simplicity is the key sometimes
    :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is so pretty. I love the rainbow imagery added in there. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    And there you go again:)
    What a beautiful haiku this is?
    Really love it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    Ok..finding time to breath and finally comment :) I'm always kind of critical of haiku because there is a very small frame to get the message across so...here goes..

    Clear circles spinning
    prism rainbows mate with trees
    bubbles of nature

    If you are referring to the bubbles here...I've never seen a clear bubble yet....I guess they are perfectly formed but...I would replace clear with blurred...just because each one is different...they may look the same but..they're not ..like snowflakes...sorry..rambling a little..hope you get the guist of my comment :)