This is very touching and emotional. I told you earlier also that your all poems are like the scenes of a movie of your life.
"You won't know the pain I'm in
And when you ask me why
As I reach for the handle bar
The door knob
The way out
And away from together
My heart will slice again
Another crack" These lines are very very sad.

This is very sad love poem and it's really cute sweetie and you can have him he's there for the taking 5/5

Queen of Me

Great poem!!!

Intense.. I truly loved it and love your writing

I love the way you write. Its hard to lose someone or fall in love and lose someone. Just remember that time heals all things including a broken heart. I hope your love loves you back you deserve happiness <3 5/5