Close your eyes

This poem almost reads like a song :) It is so beautifully worded and expressed. I actually love the part that says ....

"So just take my hand and ill hold you close"

it is the sentiment of the whole poem I think... That you are offering your hand of friendship, strength and love to this person. That you will hold them close, taking their sadness way.

I loved this poem a lot!

As always very heartouching :)
Well done Robert and keep penning! :))

Ah, haha no wonder.

You know, when I read that line.

but if you look around, you just might find me holding out my hand.

^^ I picture let's say "you" holding out your hand.... holding your hand. So it didn't make sense or at least it sounded strange. I mean why would you hold your own hand? that was my thought.

But now that I know it's holding out my hand to you then that makes a whole lot of sense.

Also my bad, I was so distracted by that line that I didn't pay attention to the line that follow. It's more explained with that one.

I like the ending the most,

There is something strange on this one:s

But if you look around you just might find
Me holding out my hand

^^ is it my hand or your hand? But if you look around, you just might find me holding out your hand.

I think that's how i pictured it base on the rest of the poem. I mean it's a bit strange to find yourself holding out your hand XD... Specially since I feel a feeling of reassurance that everything will be okay.