5 days

by Cassie   Jul 1, 2004


~*Day one
my best friend is beautiful-
she is sweet and popular
the guys all adore her

she is my role model
my angel in the sky
she guides me

she doesnt care about her high reputation
she only cares about others

in my eyes she\'s perfect-
in everyones eyes shes perfect

~*Day two
today my best friend wasnt right
she looked like she had put up a fight
little did everyone notice that she wasnt alright

in everyones eyes everything seemed fine-
she was still perfect

~*Day three
today my best friend came to school,
eyes black and blue

still no one knew
people still thought she was too good to be true

~*Day four
today my best friend came to school
cuts up and down her arms
looking blue-
people knew

~* Day five
my best friend didnt come to school today
nothing seemed to be ok
everyone seemed to have lost their way-
this was the day

this was the day everyone knew they couldve looked past her being perfect
and simply asked \"are you ok\"

this was the day my best friend commited suicide

~*I kinda wrote this to explain me from my best friends point of view.. hope you like it

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  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    That truly was an amazing poem....
    very nicely done

  • 20 years ago

    by Casondra

    Heyy yeah I agree with Amy...this poem is really good. So umm yeah keep it up i'm adding you to mi favorites.

    Love Ya
    *Casondra

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    i cant believe im the first to coment, that was really a fantastic poem, u have so much talent. especially for sumone ur age, keep it up