by L
Nice story, there was a part where I felt it a bit weak, eventually it regained strength and it captured my attention. |
by Robert
If you could tell me which part needed mor attention I would appreciate it. I wrote this poem a way while back. |
by L
The materials I had were short and simple |
by Robert
Thank you, i will look at that later. |
by Vic Johns
I do enjoy a good adventure poem and this one has plenty of dare and excitement within ! |