Faces in the crowd

I love this.

People are so quick to judge by appearances... if you don't look the same, they treat you like you have a disease... and it's disgusting. People are equal, we need the same things to survive, we all can relate to the same problems, same feelings, etc at some point in life.

I love the first and third stanza, they truly make this poem!

Akjdghjdgf I really love this. Added to my favorites. This is such strong piece. So beautiful.

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"I am that different I can not be
a tiny spec in life;
why can't I be a normal girl?,
why can't I be another
face in the crowd?.

^^ I think it may work better this way...

Am i that different,I can not be
a tiny spec in life?...
Why can't I be a normal girl?...
why can't I be another
face in the crowd?.

You've penned this well matey...
Small/narrow minded people grate me...
We all bleed and breath the same and we all want the same thing...
a long, full and happy life before we're gone.

Nominated kiddo :)
Into my favourites

Edit:

"Sable water lives upon my cheeks.
These quivering lips could tell a story
if you would acknowledge,
that I am one of you."

^^ my favourite stanza...
also a strong opening for the poem.