"I am that different I can not be
a tiny spec in life;
why can't I be a normal girl?,
why can't I be another
face in the crowd?.
^^ I think it may work better this way...
Am i that different,I can not be
a tiny spec in life?...
Why can't I be a normal girl?...
why can't I be another
face in the crowd?.
You've penned this well matey...
Small/narrow minded people grate me...
We all bleed and breath the same and we all want the same thing...
a long, full and happy life before we're gone.
Nominated kiddo :)
Into my favourites
Edit:
"Sable water lives upon my cheeks.
These quivering lips could tell a story
if you would acknowledge,
that I am one of you."
^^ my favourite stanza...
also a strong opening for the poem.
11 years ago
by Marcy Lewis
Akjdghjdgf I really love this. Added to my favorites. This is such strong piece. So beautiful.
People are so quick to judge by appearances... if you don't look the same, they treat you like you have a disease... and it's disgusting. People are equal, we need the same things to survive, we all can relate to the same problems, same feelings, etc at some point in life.
I love the first and third stanza, they truly make this poem!