Aww. Well I like this. A lot. You paint such a fragile picture of this hurting person and it really shows and definitely enhances the message behind the story.

Delicately worded... Quite lovely really.

The influence of God and angels was a nice touch. Adding that sense of something so surreal and unearthly, beautiful way to highlight the fragile and beautiful state of the other person.

Nice one. Definitely. I'll do a much better comment later.

O_O

Oh my gosh. This is so sweet. Literally, my eyes are watering. akljsdlhAShd I'M NOT A LOVE POEM PERSON BUT GOOD GOD. This is so sweet.

"Look at me my darling ...
this winter night never felt so warm."

That was absolutely the sweetest, most passionate part of this poem. You have a waaaay with words. I hope you aren't breakin' hearts and taking souls, Tony. xD

Really, this is lovely.
In my faves.

This poem is dripping with sweetness.

In the first stanza, I see the image of her standing in front of the mirror, criticizing herself and crying because she doesn't feel beautiful.

Second stanza: The imagery I portray from this stanza is you walking behind her, wiping her tears and telling her how beautiful she is and how she is God's gift sent especially for you. I've seen the "god's gift' in a few poems but it just stood out to me in this one, so great job with that. :)

Third: I like the question...and the melodies part was very nicely penned. The rhythm of your heartbeat becomes a lovely melody once you two join hands.

Fourth: She is perfection in your eyes, and that's all that matters.

Beautiful, romantic write!

A nicely penned piece. Reflex's the true emotion for someone special

Wow
Last paragraph is best one.
Lovely poem.

I know this poem well. To love and see someone in a light that they themselves cannot. Love always above all, love.

I very much enjoyed this poem, it was beautifully written and it very much captivated me.... its not often I read poems similar to this style.
The flow worked really well and the overall impact was great so a definite 5/5

Oh my goodness... I like this T.

Nice, short, a sweet story with a romantic tone. It shows you appreciate what you have.

I bet Linda will hate this lol.

I have you in my favorites. I saw that, Saff. Right on my acct news. ^ LOL

Haha she won't hate it she's soppy inside lol
She's just like a hard boild egg you crack it
After a bit lol