Comments : Dreaming Away A Broken Heart

  • 11 years ago

    by Rythmer21

    I need some help fellow poets. Should I add this line or no?

    Why does it seem so easy for you to forget me?
    For when the heart breaks it doesn't break even.
    What can I do to make me see?
    That all my wishes are just me dreamin'....

  • 11 years ago

    by Rythmer21

    Thank you! You are talented also :)

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Beautiful.