Oh my goodness this is so emotional and oh so sad... I love this, though. Its well written and it gets the point across; it is obvious that it's from your heart and trying to tell the person something serious. Nicely done, sweetie. 5/5 from me

See this is the type of poem you should be writing when you feel down and out. Amazing. you are amazing Dont let anyone doubt you 5/5

Really touching yet sadness clouds the heart felt words

You really made this your own , beautiful

I love this POEM ! tobehonest ! i feel you, the emotions that you have develop and yu have put it into this poem, its AMAZING :) you know i really like this guy that i go church with, but i cant open my mouth to tell him that i like him, iwant him as a bf, BUT yeah ! keep it up. and dont GIVE UP <3 10/10

Excellent, Very Nicely Done!!!

Excellent, Very Nicely Done!!!