The Dark Place

by Amy   Jul 2, 2004


I don't like it here
I'm so lonely at night
its so scary all the time
when there's never any light

I stay awake
I'm afraid to close my eyes
i want someone to save me
but no one hears my cries

I tremble in the dark
i don't even blink
the demons read my thoughts
so I'm scared to even think

Its wet and cold
and so lonely here
there's no one around
to wipe away my tears

I'm stuck in the dark place
Ive been here for days
i cant escape
and I'm so afraid

Mummy come and get me
i want to go home
i want to see the sun
i don't want to be alone

I don't even know
whether its night or day
cuz the sun never comes
to chase the darkness away

The birds never sing
there's no sound at all
just me all alone
staring at the walls

I'm waiting in the dark place
its really hard to see
mummy are you coming soon
to try and set me free

I'm giving up on hope
all my prayers are torn
god left me in the dark place
so all my faith is gone

I'm going to close my eyes
and let the demons come tonight
ill let them have my soul
i wont put up a fight

In the dark place
it feels like hell
mummy why did you
push me down this well

I can feel the demons
they're on there way
soon they'll be here
to take me away

Ill always be here
in my new home
the dark place where you left me
all alone

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  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    ... geez... that was sad, was she really in a well or what?

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Wonderful job, Amy!! I love this poem lots!! You are so talented!!
    Amy

  • 20 years ago

    by Tyler

    can't believe no one commented yet.... or voted for that matter....

    This was a very well written poem... remember what i said amy....
    This has great description and choice of words about it...

    Its good to know u are still here... everyone else seems to be leaving... <3 yew

    -Tyler-