by Lemon Apr 28, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I've always loved being the martyr |
by Angie
Sorry double post |
by Angie
This is a very inspirational piece, we all make mistakes, we all have a past and although we cannot change it, we can learn from it... move on and don't repeat them, make it better... I really like this piece, well written. |
by DeviousCharmer
I like the similes . they're unique . you express your feelings well in this. |
by Maple Tree
To escape a past is very tough to endure and to manage. The uplifting feeling of hope, rising above the ashes is very evident in this piece.. much admired.. You have an elegance in your pen.. and can share your feelings quite nicely, I like that within poems.. |