This is beautiful Andrea, I can just picture the moment in my head, and I know how comforted you are with these visits, it helps heal you, although the pain is still there, you know the comfort and the love that was shared between you.

Beautiful beautiful poetry.

x

There a lot I want to say for this piece, but I dont why I cant write it down.
Truly beautiful and a bit sad as well.
Great poem<3

This piece touches my heart in more ways than I could ever explain... I could picture this in my minds eye as I read... simply beautiful with a hint of sadness yet so peaceful too...

Absolutely stunning, Andrea. The sadness is evident.. however, the visit and the ending hold so much comfort. Tea time with her was something special you shared and you will always hold onto those memories...and she will too. <3

Touching, oh so very touching.

HUGS!

This is so touching, but so sad. I can't decide what this is. This is so great, Andrea. Always such gorgeous writing. Such a calming picture in my head, and just everything about this is peaceful.

I'm trying to comment properly, and I can't even do that. This is such a sweet poem.

She knew I would struggle
with "the end", her spirit
rode upon a morning breeze
listening to every word I
allowed to pour from my
silent tongue.

This was just so sad. It has this sleepy kind of feel to it. Almost a numbness, but not quite. I can't explain. I just really love this.

xoxo

A Splendid Write Maple!!!