My Name Is...

by WintersAngel   Apr 29, 2013


My name is Depression
I break into your soul
I tear you apart
And leave a lonely black hole

My name is Suicide
I live in your veins
I sneak into your head
And drive you insane

My name is Death
I bring great sadness
Many confuse me
As a sound of madness

My name is Hate
I live in your heart
I bring you down
And rip you apart

My name is Love
You'll never know me
You dont deserve
The happiness I bring

My name is Hurt
I am in your bones
I destroy
The only home you've ever known

My name is Insecurity
I tell you you're ugly
I make you feel hideous
And so untrustworthy

My name is Life
You've treated me wrong
You don't deserve me
You've known all along

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  • 11 years ago

    by Black pearl

    I bring great sadness.
    Is sadness really great?
    I think it should be 'flood of sadness' or some other dark adjective, but not great.
    Then, this stanza should be the second last stanza.

    My name is Love

    You'll never know me

    You dont deserve

    The happiness I bring.

    Rest i feel this is one of the best poem i have ever read.

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My name is Suicide
    I live in your veins
    I sneak into your head
    And drive you insane

    ^^ I like that you chose this stanza to start, because suicide is the ultimate ending when you know these thoughts the way that you've described them here. I really like the way you worded this one.

    My name is Death
    I bring great sadness
    Many confuse me
    As a sound of madness

    ^^ This one is unique, it has a nice ring to it, but I had to reread it a good bit to understand it was more simple than i originally thought.

    My name is Hate
    I live in your heart
    I bring you down
    And rip you apart

    ^^ I like this one, because hate is something we all understand, we all experience even if there has not been a suicidal period or depression.

    My name is Love
    You'll never know me
    You don't deserve
    The happiness I bring

    ^^I think this one should have been moved to before Life, it feels out of place here. However it is extremely well done.

    My name is Hurt
    I am in your bones
    I destroy
    The only home you've ever known

    ^^ This one is pretty good, but seems a little awkward as far as tempo is concerned.

    My name is Insecurity
    I tell you you're ugly
    I make you feel hideous
    And so untrustworthy

    ^^ another one anyone can relate to. And very good job with taking something so common and making it as strong as you did here.

    My name is Life
    You've treated me wrong
    You don't deserve me
    You've known all along

    ^^ Perfect ending! Stunning Conclusion! Amazing.

    All in all its a great piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by A

    This is just an amazing poem I absolutely love this! This is so true u explained them very well love it!

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