Mellifluous (Reversed Nonet)

by Meme   Apr 29, 2013


Why
ask for
diamonds
when the glimmer
of your eyes captures
me the most. Why ask when
the warmth of your whispers ties
my heart with yours; like harmonized
strings in orchestrated lullabies.

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© Copyright 2013 by: gIrL
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**For a club contest**

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    When reading this in the club, I was blown away. I adore everything about this poem - form, word usage, metaphors ... EVERYTHING! :)

    Like the other ladies said, very elegant write. Adding to my favorites!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    LOVE the form girl!!! Havent read one of these in AGES...so refreshing!!

    This is so incredibly beautiful. Love that in these few lines, you question 2 things, then answer it in the end...

    Elegant is the perfect description for your words here. Makes me want to fall in love with someones eyes.

    beautiful!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Hehe, eyes can have such an impact on someone ;)

      Thanks!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Hehe, eyes can have such an impact on someone ;)

      Thanks!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    First of all Meme- I love the reversed Nonet, its very pretty, happy to see you use this form.

    You took this beautiful word and made it your own, with elegance in the word usage you chose.. using diamonds in a creative way.. absolutely beautiful!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks to your amazing challenges :)

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