by Tara Kay
I remember reading through the poems and kept getting drawn back to this one, I felt that even though the form was simple it was really well executed, the flow was flawless and I loved the gentle tone and the wording... |
by TSI25
This pretty much screams college life at me... the night time and instantiation of the scene sort of make me think of a party, especially with the mention of a tequila sunrise. |
by L
Halcyon, I like that word. |
You defined the word so beautifully it makes me want to add it to my weak vocabulary |
by Redangelwings
The title is very strong I agree I also had to look it up actually. I loved how you used it for an acrostic though. As the word halcyon means I loved the flow and peacefulness this poem brings to my heart. I also love how you have written the poem as well. It flows so very well here. The lines seem to mesh as one. |