by Wild Flower
There is sadness mixed with the darkness., maybe because of depression or something else. |
by Lemon
I love the idea of distortion- like losing contact of reality- links in very well with the theme. "Memories dripping from the tips of my fingers"- I like the imagery and feeling. Very good poem :) |
by Tara Kay
I knew that if you'd choose any it would be this one...and you did the title good...this poem, Natasha, is just pure sadness and dark thoughts that mesh together, how the bad days and the good times harbour something in between them. And also, the idea that the darkness of depression can end with the light at the end of the line, whether hope or death |
Loved the darkness tone with sad feelings |
The release of pain caused by darkness created light... maybe sort of like the light at the end of the tunnel reference. |
by Marcy Lewis
Holy shiznits. I can't believe I haven't read this until now. I always read, but somehow missed this one? Good lord. This sent chills up my spine. |
by Skyfire
"Follow the light to a lacerated dream." |
by ah satan 666
Thank you :) |
by Formidable Muse
Oh how I have missed reading your poetry (: |
by Midnight Sky
Good job very dark love it |