Quite deep for such a sort poem ...

You did really well with the tittle .

You got the whole essence of those self release poems, that just happen to appear without us really trying...

great power in a short piece, Rusheena
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I've grown rather fond of writing/reading short pieces lately. They seem to pack a bigger punch and gets to the point quickly using the right words. You done it flawlessly! Writing a quick release, jotting down heart felt lines only to see them blur with tears.

Lovely!

Great piece .. Short but not lacking in meaning .. Keep dreaming