Oh my god, sweetie this is sooo sad! Beautiful but sad! Its so heartbreaking and you expressed your emotions wonderfully, as usual....

I have to agree, very well said, emotions flowed in abundance and worded with clarity.

Fantastic Write, Amazing Work!!!

So, the title is what drew me in ... although I don't think it really needs the (and she means it) part... unless you have said goodbye in the past and didn't truly mean it, but still... I think the actual title without the words in parentheses sound better. Just my opinion, though.

This poem is obviously about a relationship turned into heartbreak, it radiates of raw emotion.

"Letting out sops into my billow"

^ I think with sops you meant sobs? and billow , pillow?

I do think this poem could benefit being put into stanzas as well as some punctuation throughout. It would be easier for the reader to read. Once again, just a suggestion.

Overall, I really liked this poem, it dripped continuously with heartbreak and sadness and can be relatable to about everyone that's ever gone through heartbreak.