Simple World

by Odd David   May 2, 2013


I walk among the angels
Dance upon a dream
Live inside a rainbow
Or that is what it seems

You may think I'm crazy,
or completely out of touch
Yet happy is my world
in a life I love so much.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Just like they say it is those simple things in life which make us smile, likewise it is that simple life which brings us peace and harmony. A life we would love..short yet a meaningful read :)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Simple but refreshing.

  • 11 years ago

    by abracadabra

    Aw, good for you, Odd David. Just commenting to say hi and I like your profile name.

    That said, I would love you to write a poem alluding to this oddness of your life without losing the simplicity of your happy world.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I thought it was a wonderfully short and simple poem. Not overdoing it, and keeping the rhythm and rhymes clear and strong. A good piece.

    Brad

    P.S. Please don't be dishearted by the four-point rating. I only give a select few a 5/5.

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