I thought it was a wonderfully short and simple poem. Not overdoing it, and keeping the rhythm and rhymes clear and strong. A good piece.

Brad

P.S. Please don't be dishearted by the four-point rating. I only give a select few a 5/5.

Aw, good for you, Odd David. Just commenting to say hi and I like your profile name.

That said, I would love you to write a poem alluding to this oddness of your life without losing the simplicity of your happy world.

Simple but refreshing.

Just like they say it is those simple things in life which make us smile, likewise it is that simple life which brings us peace and harmony. A life we would love..short yet a meaningful read :)