Comments : I'm Right Here, Always

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Awwwww this is sooo adorable!

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    This piece is adorably sweet!! By the way you wrote it all down, you describe yourself perfectly well in this piece..

    "I don't have great patience,
    And I like to fights,"

    - You're not just describing yourself here, I can see that. You're also describing how you would react in a relationship and patience is something that you lack. That's cute.

    "You tell me you love me regardless
    Cause I brought you back to life,"

    - Omg. I really love this two lines.. Means your partner is really blessed for having you in their life cause it is stated that you brought them back to life. I really adore these lines!

    "You say in the dark
    That I am your light,
    But I'm not as perfect as you think I am"

    - Now this is their lovely way of saying that they love how you're always down for them no matter what, that even in darkness, you are their light.. And perfection, is hard to be define when we're in a relationship..

    But all in all, I really love this piece.. Good luck!
    And, keep on writing! <3