The "Tug of Life".

by SpartanOdyssee   May 3, 2013


Never let go, or don't grasp first of all.
Were you to lose grip, then in one hand spit.
Whilst the other's still holding,
your renewed strength unfolding.

One more moment, breathe.
The fire within you'll feed.
And then, with unrelenting fierceness! Boooom!!
You're back in business.

Like a zealot pulling away.
Again inner strength might decay.
Repeat step two to change perspective.
And reconsider changing to a strategy, more effective.

Holding on first felt afar.
Now know "Victor's" we ALL are.
Realise this to empower your strife.
And for the remainder of existence enjoy, The Tug of Life.

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(not sure this even is a poem or a rhyme, nor am I a native English speaker. Been rhyming as long as I can remember. Never really went online with it though. Go easy on me, lol).

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  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    It flows and then it doesn't I don't really know what to make of this poem to be honest it has good qualities and it can DEFINITELY be better but I don't know what to spin of it hun so I'll rate it later hopefully you take my criticism in a good way

    -Bet

    • 10 years ago

      by SpartanOdyssee

      Hey Queen.

      Don't worry! I can handle criticism, especially when it's positive!

      This rhyme is one you need to read up loud. It's more of an invigorating speech than a poem/rhyme, haha.

      We all had our share of good times, and the somewhat less. Basically the Tug of Life, is to never let go. But sometimes you need to take a breather, regain your strength.

      I'll have another look at it soon, perhaps I could tweak it somewhat.

      Thanks for the comment anyways!

      Cheers,

      Dennis.

  • 11 years ago

    by SpartanOdyssee

    Any form of criticism is welcome by the way!

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