Girls don't mean to judge, some feel it's better safe then sorry, we try to break out of our shell but it's not easy, to give a guy our heart and then find out all his words were a lie, I know all guys don't do this, but it makes a girl rethink any guy, remember how kind the other was at the beginning, I know you don't deserve to be judged for past heartbreaks, I'm sorry! |
I'm going to critique a few things, and I really hope you don't take it personally. It's definitely not meant to be that way, just a few suggestions that I think this poem could benefit from. |
Thanks... :) sorry i admit my grammar and also my english sometimes were sucks... but thanks |