This poem is dark and exciting. I loved it.

I loved this poem! Not only is it exciting, but, it is also extremely different from other things I have read.

Wow this was intense, I love your style of writing, I cannot get enough of it, two thumbs up!

"No, beautiful prey, you are my pet,
Dance the night away with me
My shackled love, don't you fret
You'll be mine forever, faithfully."
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NOW that part was my ABSOLUTE favorite since i mean i've been through this is emotionaly trying to pull away and demons (sadly in my case) pulling me towards an abyss of darkness and my heart (may it rot) wanted what this poem wanted at first lol good poem Raven and i love it!!!! it's dark and beautiful like my daughter 5/5

Queen Ashlin
your mommy